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So, Does this Qualifly as a short essay?

Thu Nov 5, 2009, 6:11 PM
  • Mood: Neutral
  • Listening to: Superheros- Daft Punk
  • Reading: The History of the World in 6 Glasses
  • Watching: My dog be fat
  • Playing: Halo
  • Eating: Yogurt and peanuts
  • Drinking: water
So, I'm taking a personal fitness class online and I was curious to know if this short essay I wrote is worth turning in.
Actually I submitted it already xD
The prompt said to compare different people and the factors of their workout habits or something of that sort.
Keep in mind that I haven't really been "active" in this class so I just bull!@#$ed this. Lol.
This is what I wrote:

I have chosen to compare my brother to myself, in doing so I have seen our "workout habits." My brother tends to work out mostly... his thumbs by playing video games all day. This factor of strict game play has neither stretched his body nor his brain. He also spends much of his time working out that arm for the insertion of food into his mouth. This has lead to either that muscle or flab of his arms. As for myself I'm hardly differ much from his said habits. My required stretching for this course, band practice and the dancing at the weekly football game has gotten me to be fairly active. As well as my brother I too exercise my thumbs playing said video games. These factors have taken a toll on our bodies and have created a small layer of fat around our stomachs making working out something we wish to not favor.

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:iconbeanie-jess-09:
Thank's for the Fav =D

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:iconksnkun:
Your welcome.
I like the creepy feel to it.
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Your friend did a great job drawing it.
And you colored it very well too.

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:iconbeanie-jess-09:
thank's that means a lot... I was aiming for the creepyness and I seem to have hit it spot on and yes I think they did a fantastic job too! =D

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:iconumerr2000:
helloo! you've been featured :D

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:iconksnkun:
Thanks.

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:iconumerr2000:
your welcome :D

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Hey! Me and :iconfancyrandomname: are having a contest and I need help with the prizes and spreading the word. If you can help in anyway please comment on My profile or note Me. Thanks! Or if you know anyone who could help with the prizes or spread the word please ask them!

Heres the link to the contest
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:iconksnkun:
WEll the link you gave me I can't see so I can't help you with that.
If you send me a better message maybe I'll help.
Who are you by the way?

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:iconellyrox59:
Hmm? oh im a friend of Chris (:iconfancyrandomname:) my names Melissa
[link] its the journal on the side bar

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I see?
I don't recognize neither your nor your friends screen name. D:
I see, I'll look into your contest.
Right now I'm a bit busy with a lot of stuff.

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